Read the sentence. after sampling a few cake samples, the woman who is getting married picked the flavor of cake that she liked the best. which answer choice is the best revision of the sentence to avoid repetition? a. after sampling a few cake samples, the bride picked the best flavor. b. after tasting cake samples, the bride picked the best flavor. c. after tasting the cakes, the woman getting married picked the best cake flavor. d. the sentence is correct as written.
The answer is B)
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The correct answer is B.
In the original sentence sampling/samples are repeated which is unnecessary. In addition the woman who is getting married can be simplified down to 'the bride'. The word cake doesn't need to be repeated again also. So the simplified version of the original sentence without repetition would be 'After tasting cake samples, the bride picked the best flavor'.
B) the patient told the doctor about the symptoms affecting both her head and eyesight.
Explanation: In the given sentence, we have some repetition problems, like saying "...her head hurt and that she was experiencing.." is an example of repetition of grammatical structures, and also "blurry vision with her eyesight" is a repetition because if she is experimenting blurry vision, it is obviously in her eyesight, the choice that is the best revision of the sentence to avoid repetition is " the patient told the doctor about the symptoms affecting both her head and eyesight."
"The woman who is getting married will pick the flavor of the cake that she likes the best after sampling."
B) After tasting cake samples, the bride picked the best flavor.
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Correct answer is:B. After sampling a few cake samples, the bride picked up the best flavor.
This option is the one that is being more effective in delivering a message with the least use of words. If you pay attention, it is delivering the exact same message as the original text but is not being repetitive in the sense that is not using words or terms that are similar to each other, which the other options do.
Repetition is great when the intent of the writer is to emphasize something within the text, but it had to be done carefully, otherwise is just a mistake that makes the reading experience a little bit clumsy. It is actually a very common mistake for the not so experienced writer, but nothing to worry about, there are many tips out there to avoid being repetitive, like reading what you wrote several times and trying to think if it could be said in an easier to understand way or really identifying when words that you are using are referring to the same concept and eliminate as necessary.
Option A is the right answer.
Repetition is the act of repeating something that has previously been stated or recorded. Though we can repeat some words in the formation of a sentence, it creates a sentence very unattractive. Therefore, by changing some words, or by changing some form of the sentence we can avoid repetition. As in the given statement, the repetition of words can be replaced by option A. Avoiding repetition with some other words does not change the meaning of the sentence of the statement.
The correct answer is option B
A patient visited the doctor with the symptoms of blurred vision with her eyesight and hurt head. This is the way by which the words were repeated and now this sentence can also be written in the form that the words are not repeated.
The sentence could be "The patient told the doctor that she is having symptoms affecting both her eyes and head.
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